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My name is Pasha. I work remotely, which gives me the opportunity to travel while working.
I've been passionate about football since I was 9 years old—I enjoy both watching matches and playing myself. My favorite team is Barcelona.
I also enjoy playing computer games, with FIFA and Rockstar games being my favorites.
I love sports and various physical activities. In school, I used to swim, and I’ve participated several times in Moscow cycling festivals. I’ve also tried Thai boxing.
I like learning new things, especially in technical fields. Currently, I’m learning English and looking for more opportunities to practice it.
I enjoy traveling and meeting new people, learning about their cultures and traditions. In return, I’m happy to share stories about my life and experiences.

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Telegram:
pavelss_k

Por qué estoy en Couchsurfing

Culture exchanges, new friends

Intereses

• board games
• traveling
• hip-hop music
• sports
• history
• football
• gaming
• programming

Música, películas y libros

Book: The Black Swan

Algo increíble que he hecho

I lived in the second coldest capital of the world - Astana for three months in winter

Enseña, aprende, comparte

Data culture, English, Football knowledge

Países que he visitado

Armenia, Austria, Belarus, Bosnia and Herzegovina, Croatia, Czech Republic, France, Germany, Kyrgyzstan, Montenegro, Serbia, Spain, Sri Lanka, Thailand, Turkey

Países en los que he vivido

Kazakhstan, Russian Federation